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Make me a stand-up comedian: Week 2

Is it bad to be ‘overthinking girl’? That’s what I’m wondering this week.

I LEARNED TWO important things about stand-up comedy last week:

1: What you think is the funniest part of the story isn’t always the funniest part of the story

2: You have licence to exaggerate your character on stage in the name of comedy – but you might not like what you discover about yourself.

Back in the classroom

gaeity This ISN'T my class, but this is what warm-ups look like when you do the stand-up course. Gaiety School of Acting Gaiety School of Acting

For our second week under the eye of comedian Sharon Mannion at the Gaiety Acting School’s stand-up comedy course (missed the first part? Catch up here), some of us were feeling very nervous, but others were well prepared for the challenge.

I had taken our homework – to write down three funny things that occurred during the week – literally, and had three short instances of semi-funny things to talk about.

But when it came time for us to showcase our homework, everyone else who took the spotlight before me showed that they’d been clever, and had taken one event and made a mini-routine out of it. And they were great.

So when it came time for me to talk about my ideas, I took two of them and ended up developing them on the spot. And what I discovered is that what you assume is the ‘funniest’ bit of the story is usually not where the comedy lies.

Take my first example, which was about going to the local post-office to pick up a package.

The box rattled as the postman handed it over, so he cheekily said to me: “There’s your party pills”.

“Eh, thanks – they’re actually multivitamins,” was my deadpan reply.

In the class, I went more in-depth into the story: how I’d once had a massive argument with this particular postman when I first moved to the area and turned up to collect a package without ID; how since then, he’d been (confusingly) super nice to me; how I don’t order much online and felt a thrill at being mistaken for a part-time drug buyer, when the truth is far more boring.

Overthinking Girl

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Sharon took the focus off the quips and encouraged me to look at developing the interaction between me and the postman.

She suggested taking the focus off his joke, and putting it onto how I overthink my ‘relationship’ with him and my trips to pick up the post. The scenario soon got new legs, thanks to the input of my fellow classmates.

It showed me that comedy is about finding the funny in the normal, but adding a pinch of fantasy or exaggeration to spice things up a bit.

I could see that too in how my classmates were able to emphasise certain parts of their stories to make them even funnier.

You’re not quite yourself on stage – you’re an exaggerated version of yourself (or you could be an entirely different character if you wish).

This brought me face-to-face with a part of my personality that I didn’t think I’d end up exploring on stage.

“You could be the ‘overthinking girl’ character,” suggested Mannion.

The problem? I am overthinking girl, and I know it. And, at 32, I’m trying to become ‘not-so-overthinking woman’.

So do I exploit this part of my personality for humour, or do I leave her where I think she should stay – shackled to a mental shelf somewhere?

If it gets laughs, will it be worth exploring ‘overthinking girl’ in my routine at the end of the course? Or do I mind dragging this part of me out for strangers to see?

That’s something I’m still grappling with – and overthinking about.

I’ll be writing once a week for the next eight weeks about how I’m getting on.

Have you any tips? Got a favourite comedian whose work you’d like to share? Just want to take the p*** out of me? That’s what the comments section is for…

Read: Here’s what happens when you do a stand-up comedy course: Week 1>

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    Mute james Goodyear
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    Oct 10th 2015, 9:32 AM

    Women don’t make good comediennes.

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    Oct 10th 2015, 9:50 AM

    Says the over-thinking potato.

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    Oct 10th 2015, 10:01 AM

    No actually Christopher Hitchens said it & done an article in Vanity Fair about the fact that evolution may have made men funny as they have to be for the purpose of mating whereas women don’t require the same tactic. After several rebuttals by women including several successful female comedians it appears they only managed to confirm his hypothesis.

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    Oct 10th 2015, 10:13 AM

    James, you’re a gas man. Laughing my head off here at your witty joke!

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    Oct 10th 2015, 10:26 AM

    Oh now!

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    Oct 10th 2015, 10:48 AM

    Boobies are not light entertainment, they have no need for cheap funbag jokes.

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    Oct 10th 2015, 9:34 PM

    Similar to drivers, good women comedians are a minority

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    Oct 10th 2015, 9:36 AM

    Definitely” over thinking girl”. It’s a lot better than me. I struggle very much to read people and social situations so I end up being ” what inappropriate fecking thing did I say now ” woman. Lol

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    Mute Aoife Barry
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    Oct 10th 2015, 10:24 AM

    Glad I’m not alone in that C! I think we all have situations where we overthink – and it can be such a pain. Often it doesn’t do anything positive for us either.

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    Oct 10th 2015, 10:45 AM

    Is overtalking a thing?

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    Oct 10th 2015, 11:14 AM

    Jo Brand is a brilliant comedian, doesn’t take any crap and knows how to deliver a good story. Similar dead pan style Jack Dee. Im not a fan of Sue Perkins style as I think its very one dimensional, for me it’s more of a “look how clever and witty I am”, as opposed to delivering something funny about life. Her style seems very approval seeking.

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    Oct 10th 2015, 11:34 AM

    Great stuff Aoife! Looking forward to the next part!

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    Oct 10th 2015, 11:41 AM

    Thanks so much R! :D

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    Oct 10th 2015, 9:43 AM

    Go on,tell us a joke.

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    Oct 11th 2015, 5:10 PM

    Enda and Joan are leaders of their parties in a government together, how’s that dj lol.

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    Oct 10th 2015, 12:23 PM

    Fair play to you Aoife! It takes courage to step out of your comfort zone and challenge yourself.

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    Oct 10th 2015, 1:06 PM

    Jim Jefferies,Doug Stanhope,George Carlin,Bill Hicks – all highly recommended

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    Oct 10th 2015, 5:12 PM

    Oh yes, I’ll add Louis CK.if you don’t mind. Doug Stanhope talking about the death of his mother is worth a watch…

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